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diff --git a/blog/draft/2010-07-03-ldap-searches.txt b/blog/draft/2010-07-03-ldap-searches.txt
index 4a6b450e0f8ca101bb856c73172fcae7f03aa81c..0e50f0d9c9856e86cc802d77db664ef6fd5d1802 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/draft/2010-07-03-ldap-searches.txt
+++ b/blog/draft/2010-07-03-ldap-searches.txt
@@ -163,10 +163,11 @@ objectclass ( some-oid NAME 'dnsDomainAux'
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 <p>This will allow any object to become a DNS entry when combined with
-the domainrelatedobject object class, and allow any object to get all
-the attributes PowerDNS wants.  I've sent an email to the PowerDNS
+the domainrelatedobject object class, and allow any entity to include
+all the attributes PowerDNS wants.  I've sent an email to the PowerDNS
 developers asking for their view on this schema and if they are
-interested in providing such schema with PowerDNS.</p>
+interested in providing such schema with PowerDNS, and I hope my
+message will be accepted into their mailing list soon.</p>
 
 <p><strong>ISC dhcp</strong></p>