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diff --git a/blog/draft/2010-07-03-ldap-searches.txt b/blog/draft/2010-07-03-ldap-searches.txt
index 4a6b450e0f8ca101bb856c73172fcae7f03aa81c..0e50f0d9c9856e86cc802d77db664ef6fd5d1802 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/draft/2010-07-03-ldap-searches.txt
+++ b/blog/draft/2010-07-03-ldap-searches.txt
@@ -163,10 +163,11 @@ objectclass ( some-oid NAME 'dnsDomainAux'
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 <p>This will allow any object to become a DNS entry when combined with
 </pre></blockquote>
 
 <p>This will allow any object to become a DNS entry when combined with

-the domainrelatedobject object class, and allow any object to get all
-the attributes PowerDNS wants.  I've sent an email to the PowerDNS
+the domainrelatedobject object class, and allow any entity to include
+all the attributes PowerDNS wants.  I've sent an email to the PowerDNS

 developers asking for their view on this schema and if they are
 developers asking for their view on this schema and if they are

-interested in providing such schema with PowerDNS.</p>
+interested in providing such schema with PowerDNS, and I hope my
+message will be accepted into their mailing list soon.</p>

 
 <p><strong>ISC dhcp</strong></p>
 
 
 <p><strong>ISC dhcp</strong></p>