More intro cleanup.

[text-mekanikerord.git] / bookinfo-en.xml

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@@ -30,19 +30,20 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      This book is based on a database with source date from words and
-      terms collected in the first half of 1990, organized and funded
-      by Samisk videregående skole og reindriftsskole, with Svein Lund
-      as editor in cooperation with others.  The same database was the
-      source of the book «Mekanihkkársánit : Mekanikerord = Mekaanisen
-      alan sanasto = Mechanic's words» (ISBN 82-7954-042-3, 1999).
-      Sámi Parliament of Norway and Svein Lund has permitted Petter
-      Reinholdtsen to publish the material with an Creative Commons
-      license CC-BY 4.0.
+      This book is based on a database with source date from terms
+      collected in the first half of 1990, organized and funded by
+      Samisk videregående skole og reindriftsskole, by editor Svein
+      Lund in cooperation with others.  The same database was the
+      source of the book <quote>Mekanihkkársánit : Mekanikerord =
+      Mekaanisen alan sanasto = Mechanic's words</quote> (ISBN
+      82-7954-042-3, 1999).  Sámi Parliament of Norway and Svein Lund
+      has permitted Petter Reinholdtsen to publish the material with
+      an Creative Commons license CC-BY 4.0.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      Please let us know if you find any errors or omissions.
+      Buy both paper and electronic edition directly from
+      <ulink url="https://lulu.com/" />.
     </para>
 
   </legalnotice>
@@ -54,19 +55,16 @@
   </isbn>
   <abstract>
     <para>
-      Boken inneholder rundt 1200 oppslagsord med forklaring og
-      tilsvarende ord på andre språk.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      Ordlisten har individuelle oppslagsord, oversettelser og
-      forklaring.  I PDF og papirutgave kan alle språkenes ordvalg slås
-      opp i registeret for å finne aktuelt oppslagsord.
+      The book contains about 1200 dictionary entries with
+      translations into other languages.  The PDF and paper edition
+      contain a register with words in every language to make it easy
+      to find the relevant dictionary entry.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      Ordene på ulike språk er markert med språkkoder i tråd med
-      ISO-639-1: (en) Engelsk, (nb) Norsk bokmål, (se) Nordsamisk, (se)
-      Svensk og (fi) Finsk.
+      The words for different languages are marked using language
+      codes according to ISO-639-1: (en) English, (nb) Norwegian
+      Bokmål, (se) Northern Sami, (sv) Swedish and (fi) Finnish.
     </para>
   </abstract>
 </bookinfo>