Clean up colophon page a bit.

diff --git a/fixup-docbook.rb b/fixup-docbook.rb
index 7c527136b790b8a49769a3042e90f812e71efbed..ba5fe26356651c8fbdec742ce98dd86946c8e6ea 100755 (executable)
--- a/fixup-docbook.rb
+++ b/fixup-docbook.rb
@@ -143,17 +143,20 @@ log 0, 'replace colophon page with one for this edition'
  xml.xpath('//colophon/para').remove
 s = xml.xpath('//colophon')[0]
 s.first_element_child.after(<<'XML')
-<para>Made with Creative Commons</para>
-
-<para>by Paul Stacey & Sarah Hinchliff Pearson</para>
+<para>Made with Creative Commons by Paul Stacey and Sarah Hinchliff Pearson</para>
 
 <para>© 2017 by the Creative Commons Foundation.</para>
 
 <para>Published under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike
 license (CC BY-SA), version 4.0.</para>
 
-<para>ISBN: YET-TO-BE-DECIDED (PDF), YET-TO-BE-DECIDED (ePub),
-YET-TO-BE-DECIDED (Paperback) </para>
+<para>The license means that you can copy, redistribute, remix,
+transform, and build upon the content for any purpose, even
+commercially, as long as you give appropriate credit, provide a link
+to the license, and indicate if changes were made. If you remix,
+transform, or build upon the material, you must distribute your
+contributions under the same license as the original. License details:
+<ulink url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/"/></para>
 
 <para>Illustrations by Bryan Mathers,
 <ulink url="https://bryanmmathers.com/"/>.</para>
@@ -165,37 +168,23 @@ YET-TO-BE-DECIDED (Paperback) </para>
 &nbsp;
 </para>
 
-<para>Downloadable e-book available at
-<ulink url="https://madewith.cc/"/>.</para>
-
-<para>This book is published under a CC BY-SA license, which means that you
-can copy, redistribute, remix, transform, and build upon the content for
-any purpose, even commercially, as long as you give appropriate credit,
-provide a link to the license, and indicate if changes were made. If you
-remix, transform, or build upon the material, you must distribute your
-contributions under the same license as the original. License details:
-<ulink url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/"/></para>
-
-<para>Made With Creative Commons is published with the kind support of
-Creative Commons and backers of our crowdfunding-campaign on the
-Kickstarter.com platform.</para>
+<para>Made With Creative Commons was originally published with the
+kind support of Creative Commons and backers of our
+crowdfunding-campaign on the Kickstarter.com platform.</para>
 
 <para>This edition of the book is maintained on
 <ulink url="https://gitlab.com/gunnarwolf/madewithcc-es/"/>, and the
 translations are maintained on
 <ulink url="https://hosted.weblate.org/projects/madewithcc/"/>.  If
-you find any error in the book, please let us know via Gitlab or Weblate.</para>
+you find any error in the book, please let us know.</para>
 
-<para>
-Classifications:
-</para>
+<para>ISBN: YET-TO-BE-DECIDED (PDF), YET-TO-BE-DECIDED (ePub),
+YET-TO-BE-DECIDED (Paperback) </para>
 
-<para>
-(Dewey) 346.048, 347.78
-</para>
+<para><ulink url="https://madewith.cc/"/></para>
 
 <para>
-(UDK) ?
+(Dewey) 346.048, 347.78
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -206,10 +195,6 @@ Classifications:
 (Melvil) 025.523
 </para>
 
-<para>
-(ACM CRCS) ?
-</para>
-
 XML
 
 log 0, 'remove title from colophon'