Adjust translation, do not assume 'close case' mean 'closed case'.

[text-free-culture-lessig.git] / freeculture-about-edition-en.xml

diff --git a/freeculture-about-edition-en.xml b/freeculture-about-edition-en.xml
index 372c70f5fca8b7a17eb6c77fa47cc6b19adccba6..9e7664168aad44bfde11c930fdcf372e9769a0eb 100644 (file)
--- a/freeculture-about-edition-en.xml
+++ b/freeculture-about-edition-en.xml
@@ -37,9 +37,10 @@ me track down a good replacement font without usage restrictions
 instead of the one in the original edition.  The typesetting is done
 using dblatex, which was selected over the alternatives thanks to the
 invaluable and quick help from Benoît Guillon and Andreas Hoenen.
-Thomas Gramstad donated ISBN numbers needed for distribution to book
-stores.  Marc Jeanmougin from the inkscape community helped me
-replicate the original front cover.
+Thomas Gramstad helped me understand the ISBN system, so I could get
+the ISBN numbers needed make book store distribution possible.  Marc
+Jeanmougin from the inkscape community helped me replicate the
+original front cover.
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -55,7 +56,7 @@ patience with me in this project.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-&ndash; Petter Reinholdtsen, Oslo 2015-10-12
+&ndash; Petter Reinholdtsen, Oslo 2015-10-17
   </para>
 
 </chapter>