New York headquarters was telling the reporter over and over that her
account of the war was too bleak: She needed to offer a more
optimistic story. When she told New York that wasn't warranted, they
-told her <emphasis>that</emphasis> they were writing "the story.")
+told her that <emphasis>they</emphasis> were writing "the story.")
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<para> Blog space gives amateurs a way to enter the
debate—"amateur" not in the sense of inexperienced, but in the