Try to make cover prettier.

[text-free-culture-lessig.git] / freeculture.xml

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+++ b/freeculture.xml
@@ -15658,18 +15658,18 @@ selected over the alternatives thanks to the invaluable and quick help
 from Benoît Guillon and Andreas Hoenen.  Thomas Gramstad donated ISBN
 numbers needed for distribution to book stores.  Marc Jeanmougin from
 the inkscape community helped me replicate the original front cover.
-The support of Lawrence Lessig helped me to complete the project
-– I am very thankful he had the original screen shots still
-available after 11 years.
+The support of Lawrence Lessig helped me to complete the
+project—I am very thankful he had the original screen shots
+still available after 11 years.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-I am also very grateful for my family for their patience with me in
-this project.
+In addition to these great contributors, I am very grateful to Mari
+and my family for their patience with me in this project.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-&mdash; Petter Reinholdtsen, Oslo 2015-09-04
+&mdash; Petter Reinholdtsen, Oslo 2015-09-07
   </para>
 
 </chapter>