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@@ -15630,15 +15630,14 @@ grateful for her perpetual patience and love.
 <chapter>
 <!-- Quotes from http://free-culture.cc/jacket/, trimmed to fit on one
      page, for use on the back page of the cover. -->
-  <title></title>
+  <title>Quotes</title>
+<?latex { \setlength{\parskip}{1em} %
+?>
   <para>
 <quote><citetitle>Free Culture</citetitle> is an entertaining and
 important look at the past and future of the cold war between the
-media industry and new technologies.</quote>
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-&mdash; Marc Andreessen, cofounder of Netscape 
+media industry and new technologies.</quote> &mdash; <emphasis>Marc Andreessen,
+cofounder of Netscape</emphasis>
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -15655,12 +15654,10 @@ who want to join this conversation. He explains how technology and the
 law are robbing us of the public domain; but for all his educated
 pessimism, Professor Lessig offers some solutions, too, because he
 recognizes that technology can be the catalyst for freedom. If you
-care about the future of innovation, read this book.</quote>
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-&mdash; Dan Gillmor, author of <citetitle>Making the News</citetitle>,
-an upcoming book on the collision of media and technology
+care about the future of innovation, read this book.</quote> &mdash;
+<emphasis>Dan Gillmor, author of <citetitle>Making the
+News</citetitle>, an upcoming book on the collision of media and
+technology</emphasis>
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -15670,12 +15667,12 @@ examples of how we can make a different future. These new-style heroes
 and examples are rooted in the traditions of the founding fathers in
 ways that seem obvious after reading this book. Recommended reading to
 those trying to unravel the shrill hype around <quote>intellectual
-property.</quote></quote>
+property.</quote></quote> &mdash; <emphasis>Brewster Kahle, founder of the
+Internet Archive</emphasis>
   </para>
 
-  <para>
-&mdash; Brewster Kahle, founder of the Internet Archive
-  </para>
+<?latex } %
+?>
 
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      have space for more text on one page. -->
@@ -15703,23 +15700,24 @@ validation errors in this version, but after some work I was able to
 transform it to PDF and EPUB.  This was the start of the translation
 project.  The Docbook file improved over time, and build rules were
 added to create both English and Bokmål versions.  Finally, a call for
-volunteers went out to get help me with the translation.
+volunteers went out to help me with the translation.
   </para>
 
   <para>
 Several people joined, and Anders Hagen Jarmund, Kirill Miazine and
 Odd Kleiva assisted with the initial translation.  Ralph Amissah and
-his SiSu versoin provide index entries.  Morten Sickel and Alexander
+his SiSu version provided index entries.  Morten Sickel and Alexander
 Alemayhu helped with the figures, redrawing some of the bitmaps as
-vector images.  Wivi Reinholdtsen, Ingrid Yrvin and Anna Kennedy did
-very valuable proofreading.  Håkon Wium Lie helped me track down a
+vector images.  Wivi Reinholdtsen, Ingrid Yrvin and Johannes Larsen
+did very valuable proofreading.  Håkon Wium Lie helped me track down a
 good replacement font without usage restrictions instead of the one in
-original PDF.  The PDF typesetting is done using dblatex.  dblatex was
+the original PDF.  The PDF typesetting is done using dblatex, which we
 selected over the alternatives thanks to the invaluable and quick help
 from Benoît Guillon and Andreas Hoenen.  Thomas Gramstad donated ISBN
 numbers needed for distribution to book stores.  The support of
-Lawrence Lessig helped me to complete the project - I am very thankful
-he had the original screen shots still available after 11 years.
+Lawrence Lessig helped me to complete the project &ndash; I am very
+thankful he had the original screen shots still available after 11
+years.
   </para>
 
   <para>