Rephrase the CC info a bit.

[text-free-culture-lessig.git] / freeculture.xml

diff --git a/freeculture.xml b/freeculture.xml
index b69ebc56d7fbaab812609547fd82f64a656a69f3..26731428c48020a5f7c566290155070d0188bfc1 100644 (file)
--- a/freeculture.xml
+++ b/freeculture.xml
@@ -92,10 +92,9 @@
    </para>
 
    <para>
    </para>
 
    <para>

-This version of <citetitle>Free Culture</citetitle> is licensed under
-a Creative Commons license. This license permits non-commercial use of
-this work, so long as attribution is given.  For more information
-about the license visit
+This book is licensed under a Creative Commons license. This license
+permits non-commercial use of this work, so long as attribution is
+given.  For more information about the license visit

 <ulink url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/</ulink>
    </para>
  </legalnotice>
 <ulink url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/</ulink>
    </para>
  </legalnotice>


@@ -15653,10 +15652,9 @@ Copyright &copy; 2004 Lawrence Lessig.  Some rights reserved.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 </para>
 
 <para>

-This version of <citetitle>Free Culture</citetitle> is licensed under
-a Creative Commons license. This license permits non-commercial use of
-this work, so long as attribution is given.  For more information
-about the license visit
+This book is licensed under a Creative Commons license. This license
+permits non-commercial use of this work, so long as attribution is
+given.  For more information about the license visit

 <ulink url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/</ulink>
 </para>
 
 <ulink url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/</ulink>
 </para>