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@@ -900,9 +900,9 @@ independent. We have built a kind of cultural nobility; those within
 the noble class live easily; those outside it don't. But it is
 nobility of any form that is alien to our tradition.
 </para>
-<!-- PAGE BREAK 26. FIXME: Should "Is it" be "It is" ? -->
+<!-- PAGE BREAK 26. FIXME: Ask author if "Is it" should be "It is" ? -->
 <para>
-The story that follows is about this war. Is it not about the
+The story that follows is about this war. It is not about the
 <quote>centrality of technology</quote> to ordinary life. I don't believe in gods,
 digital or otherwise. Nor is it an effort to demonize any individual
 or group, for neither do I believe in a devil, corporate or
@@ -2751,7 +2751,6 @@ access to material from that institution.  Businesses do this all the
 time, enabling employees to have access to material that people
 outside the business can't get. Universities do it as well.
 </para>
-<indexterm startref='idxuniversitycomputernetworksppsharingon' class='endofrange'/>
 <indexterm id='idxjordanjesse' class='startofrange'><primary>Jordan, Jesse</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm id='idxmicrosoftnetworkfilesystemof' class='startofrange'><primary>Microsoft</primary><secondary>network file system of</secondary></indexterm>
 <para>
@@ -6697,7 +6696,7 @@ looting that results.
 </para>
 <figure id="fig-1381">
 <title>effective state of anarchy after the Internet.</title>
-<graphic fileref="images/1381.png" align="center" width="50%"></graphic>
+<graphic fileref="images/1381.svg" align="center" width="50%"></graphic>
 
 </figure>
 <indexterm><primary>Commerce, U.S. Department of</primary></indexterm>
@@ -7028,7 +7027,7 @@ We will end here:
 </para>
 <figure id="fig-1442">
 <title><quote>Copyright</quote> today.</title>
-<graphic fileref="images/1442.png" align="center" width="50%"></graphic>
+<graphic fileref="images/1442.svg" align="center" width="50%"></graphic>
 </figure>
 <para>
 Let me explain how.
@@ -7554,8 +7553,8 @@ Obviously, however, some uses of a copyrighted book are regulated
 by copyright law. Republishing the book, for example, makes a copy. It
 is therefore regulated by copyright law. Indeed, this particular use stands
 at the core of this circle of possible uses of a copyrighted work. It is the
-paradigmatic use properly regulated by copyright regulation (see first
-diagram on next page).
+paradigmatic use properly regulated by copyright regulation (see 
+diagram <xref xrefstyle="select: labelnumber" linkend="fig-1541"/>).
 </para>
 <indexterm startref='idxderivativeworkspiracyvs4' class='endofrange'/>
 <indexterm startref='idxpiracyderivativeworkvs4' class='endofrange'/>
@@ -7927,7 +7926,7 @@ a button at the bottom called Permissions.
 </para>
 <figure id="fig-1611">
 <title>Picture of an old version of Adobe eBook Reader</title>
-<graphic fileref="images/1611.svg" align="center" width="50%"></graphic>
+<graphic fileref="images/1611.png" align="center" width="50%"></graphic>
 </figure>
 <para>
 If you click on the Permissions button, you'll see a list of the
@@ -9603,7 +9602,7 @@ on remote topics of science or culture. There is a vast amount of creative
 work spread across the Internet. But as the law is currently crafted, this
 work is presumptively illegal.
 </para>
-<indexterm><primary>Worldcom</primary></indexterm>
+<indexterm><primary>WorldCom</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm><primary>copyright infringement lawsuits</primary><secondary>exaggerated claims of</secondary></indexterm>
 <indexterm><primary>copyright infringement lawsuits</primary><secondary>in recording industry</secondary></indexterm>
 <indexterm><primary>doctors malpractice claims against</primary></indexterm>
@@ -9627,7 +9626,7 @@ See Lynne W. Jeter, <citetitle>Disconnected: Deceit and Betrayal at WorldCom</ci
 the settlement, see MCI press release, <quote>MCI Wins U.S. District Court
 Approval for SEC Settlement</quote> (7 July 2003), available at
 <ulink url="http://free-culture.cc/notes/">link #37</ulink>.
-<indexterm><primary>Worldcom</primary></indexterm>
+<indexterm><primary>WorldCom</primary></indexterm>
 </para></footnote>
 And under legislation being pushed in Congress right now, a doctor who
 negligently removes the wrong leg in an operation would be liable for