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diff --git a/blog/data/2013-01-09-hw-autoinstall.txt b/blog/data/2013-01-09-hw-autoinstall.txt
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--- a/blog/data/2013-01-09-hw-autoinstall.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2013-01-09-hw-autoinstall.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-Title: Why isn't Linux desktops installing the hw support packages automatically?
+Title: Lets make hardware dongles easier to use in Debian

 Tags: english, debian
 Tags: english, debian

-Date: 2013-01-09 15:30
+Date: 2013-01-09 15:40

 
 <p>One thing that annoys me with Debian and Linux distributions in
 general, is that there is a great package management system with the
 
 <p>One thing that annoys me with Debian and Linux distributions in
 general, is that there is a great package management system with the


@@ -51,10 +51,11 @@ package to map the USB ids of LEGO Mindstorms and Yubikey devices to
 the relevant packages in Debian, and uploaded a new version
 2.2013.01.09 to unstable.  I also discovered that the current 
 <a href="http://packages.qa.debian.org/d/discover-data.html">discover</a>
 the relevant packages in Debian, and uploaded a new version
 2.2013.01.09 to unstable.  I also discovered that the current 
 <a href="http://packages.qa.debian.org/d/discover-data.html">discover</a>

-package in Debian no longer found any USB devices, because
-/proc/bus/usb/devices no longer is present, and ported it to use
-libusb as a fall back option.  The fixed package version 2.1.2-6 is
-now in experimental.</p>
+package in Debian no longer discovered any USB devices, because
+/proc/bus/usb/devices is no longer present.  I ported it to use
+libusb as a fall back option to get it working.  The fixed package
+version 2.1.2-6 is now in experimental (didn't upload it to unstable
+because of the freeze).</p>

 
 <p>With this prototype in place, I can insert my Yubikey, and get this
 desktop notification to show up (only once, the first time it is
 
 <p>With this prototype in place, I can insert my Yubikey, and get this
 desktop notification to show up (only once, the first time it is


@@ -63,8 +64,8 @@ inserted):</p>
 <p align="center"><img src="http://people.skolelinux.org/pere/blog/images/2013-01-09-hw-autoinstall.png"></p>
 
 <p>For this prototype to be really useful, some way to automatically
 <p align="center"><img src="http://people.skolelinux.org/pere/blog/images/2013-01-09-hw-autoinstall.png"></p>
 
 <p>For this prototype to be really useful, some way to automatically

-install the proposed packages by pressing the button should to be
-implemented.</p>
+install the proposed packages by pressing the "Please install
+program(s)" button should to be implemented.</p>

 
 <p>If this idea seem useful to you, and you want to help make it
 happen, please help me update the discover-data database with mappings
 
 <p>If this idea seem useful to you, and you want to help make it
 happen, please help me update the discover-data database with mappings