Improve language.

diff --git a/blog/data/2010-06-01-bad-bug-handling.txt b/blog/data/2010-06-01-bad-bug-handling.txt
index c73d178a2e6acb9479838de6d754f18131002fe6..802149597ad286883eba476b6bdef58ab8b7d118 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/data/2010-06-01-bad-bug-handling.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2010-06-01-bad-bug-handling.txt
@@ -3,9 +3,10 @@ Tags: english, debian, debian edu
 Date: 2010-06-01 17:05
 
 <p>It is strange to watch how a bug in Debian causing KDM to fail to
 Date: 2010-06-01 17:05
 
 <p>It is strange to watch how a bug in Debian causing KDM to fail to

-start at boot when an NVidia video card is used.  The problem seem to
-be that the nvidia X.org driver uses a long time to initialize, and
-this duration is longer than kdm is configured to wait.</p>
+start at boot when an NVidia video card is used is handled.  The
+problem seem to be that the nvidia X.org driver uses a long time to
+initialize, and this duration is longer than kdm is configured to
+wait.</p>

 
 <p>I came across two bugs related to this issue,
 <a href="http://bugs.debian.org/583312">#583312</a> initially filed
 
 <p>I came across two bugs related to this issue,
 <a href="http://bugs.debian.org/583312">#583312</a> initially filed


@@ -18,7 +19,7 @@ kdm and passed on to src:nvidia-graphics-drivers for unknown reasons.</p>
 problem nvidia video card owners experience and make sure the Debian
 distribution work out of the box for these users.  The nvidia driver
 maintainers expect kdm to be set up to wait longer, while kdm expect
 problem nvidia video card owners experience and make sure the Debian
 distribution work out of the box for these users.  The nvidia driver
 maintainers expect kdm to be set up to wait longer, while kdm expect

-the nvidia driver maintainers to fix the driver start faster, and
+the nvidia driver maintainers to fix the driver to start faster, and

 while they wait for each other I guess the users end up switching to a
 distribution that work for them.  I have no idea what the solution is,
 but I am pretty sure that waiting for each other is not it.</p>
 while they wait for each other I guess the users end up switching to a
 distribution that work for them.  I have no idea what the solution is,
 but I am pretty sure that waiting for each other is not it.</p>