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 Title: 12 years of outages - summarised by Stuart Kendrick
 Tags: english, nuug, standard
-Date: 2012-10-26 10:20
+Date: 2012-10-26 14:20
 
-<p>I work at the <ahref="http://www.uio.no/">University of Oslo</a>
+<p>I work at the <a href="http://www.uio.no/">University of Oslo</a>
 looking after the computers, mostly on the unix side, but in general
 all over the place.  I am also a member (and currently leader) of
-<ahref="http://www.nuug.no/">the NUUG association</a>, which in turn
-make me a member of <ahref="http://www.usenix.org/">USENIX</a>.  NUUG
+<a href="http://www.nuug.no/">the NUUG association</a>, which in turn
+make me a member of <a href="http://www.usenix.org/">USENIX</a>.  NUUG
 is an member organisation for us in Norway interested in free
 software, open standards and unix like operating systems, and USENIX
-is a US based member organisation with similar targets.  I tend to
-distill it down to the simple statement that all the skilled computer
-people are members of NUUG, which while a goal is still not quite
-reflected in reality.  And thanks to these memberships, I get all
-issues of the great USENIX magazine
-<ahref="https://www.usenix.org/publications/login">;login:</a> in the
+is a US based member organisation with similar targets.  And thanks to
+these memberships, I get all issues of the great USENIX magazine
+<a href="https://www.usenix.org/publications/login">;login:</a> in the
 mail several times a year.  The magazine is great, and I read most of
 it every time.</p>
 
 <p>In the last issue of the USENIX magazine ;login:, there is an
-article by <ahref="http://www.skendric.com/">Stuart Kendrick</a> from
+article by <a href="http://www.skendric.com/">Stuart Kendrick</a> from
 Fred Hutchinson Cancer Research Center titled
-<ahref="https://www.usenix.org/publications/login/october-2012-volume-37-number-5/what-takes-us-down">What
-Takes Us Down</a> (also
-<ahref="http://www.skendric.com/problem/incident-analysis/2012-06-30/What-Takes-Us-Down.pdf">available
+"<a href="https://www.usenix.org/publications/login/october-2012-volume-37-number-5/what-takes-us-down">What
+Takes Us Down</a>" (also
+<a href="http://www.skendric.com/problem/incident-analysis/2012-06-30/What-Takes-Us-Down.pdf">available
 from his own site</a>), where he report what he found when he
 processed the outage reports (both planned and unplanned) from the
 last twelve years and classified them according to cause, time of day,
@@ -67,7 +64,7 @@ User Impact: All users on H2 will be isolated from the network during
             this work. Afterward, they will have gigabit
             connectivity.
 Technician:  [xxx]
-<blockquote><pre>
+</pre></blockquote>
 
 <p>He notes in his article that the date formats and other fields have
 been a bit too free form to make it easy to automatically process them
@@ -80,7 +77,7 @@ be improved, read the article for the details.</p>
 <p>I find the idea of standardising outage messages seem to be such a
 good idea that I would like to get it implemented here at the
 university too.  We do register
-<ahref="http://www.uio.no/tjenester/it/aktuelt/planlagte-tjenesteavbrudd/">planned
+<a href="http://www.uio.no/tjenester/it/aktuelt/planlagte-tjenesteavbrudd/">planned
 changes and outages in a calendar</a>, and report the to a mailing
 list, but we do not do so in a structured format and there is not a
 report to the same location for unplanned outages.  Perhaps something