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diff --git a/blog/data/2013-09-10-freedombox.txt b/blog/data/2013-09-10-freedombox.txt
index 9480d22767cda8c4342a0053b9931ef6f5164144..eddcfc83de1c9b780dc3dc70f8f45595eb923d52 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/data/2013-09-10-freedombox.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2013-09-10-freedombox.txt
@@ -65,7 +65,8 @@ to the Debian installer:<p>
 <li>Answer the few language/region/password questions and pick disk to
 install on.</li>
 
 <li>Answer the few language/region/password questions and pick disk to
 install on.</li>
 

-<li>When finished, your freedombox is ready for testing.</li>
+<li>When the installation is finished and the machine have rebooted a
+few times, your Freedombox is ready for testing.</li>

 
 </ol>
 
 
 </ol>
 


@@ -93,7 +94,7 @@ apt-get install freedombox-setup
 
 <p>Note that by default Freedombox is a DHCP server on the
 192.168.1.0/24 subnet, so if this is your subnet be careful and turn
 
 <p>Note that by default Freedombox is a DHCP server on the
 192.168.1.0/24 subnet, so if this is your subnet be careful and turn

-off the dhcp server by running "<tt>update-rc.d isc-dhcp-server
+off the DHCP server by running "<tt>update-rc.d isc-dhcp-server

 disable</tt>" as root.</p>
 
 <p>Please let me know if this work for you, or if you have any
 disable</tt>" as root.</p>
 
 <p>Please let me know if this work for you, or if you have any


@@ -107,4 +108,5 @@ mailing list</a>.</p>
 <tt>http://your-host-name:8001/</tt> to see the state of the plint
 welcome screen (dead end - do not be surprised if you are unable to
 get past it), and next visit <tt>http://your-host-name:8001/help/</tt>
 <tt>http://your-host-name:8001/</tt> to see the state of the plint
 welcome screen (dead end - do not be surprised if you are unable to
 get past it), and next visit <tt>http://your-host-name:8001/help/</tt>

-to look at the rest of plinth.</p>
+to look at the rest of plinth.  The default user is 'admin' and the
+default password is 'secret'.</p>