Juster teksten litt.

diff --git a/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt b/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt
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--- a/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 Title: When terms and policy turn users away
 Tags: english, personvern
 Title: When terms and policy turn users away
 Tags: english, personvern

-Date: 2019-12-07 21:10
+Date: 2019-12-07 21:15

 
 <p>When asked to accept terms of use and privacy policies that state
 it will to remove rights I otherwise had or accept unreasonable terms
 
 <p>When asked to accept terms of use and privacy policies that state
 it will to remove rights I otherwise had or accept unreasonable terms


@@ -36,5 +36,6 @@ asked to sign away my right to reverse engineer.</p>
 </blockquote>
 
 <p>I do not expect much to come out of it, but sharing it here in case
 </blockquote>
 
 <p>I do not expect much to come out of it, but sharing it here in case

-others want to give it a try too.  If the terms scare away enough
-people, perhaps they will be improved...</p>
+others want to give something similar a try too.  If companies
+discover their terms scare away enough people, perhaps they will be
+improved...</p>