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diff --git a/blog/data/2010-11-20-gnash-kfreebsd.txt b/blog/data/2010-11-20-gnash-kfreebsd.txt
index 9021626ee8115a4b2f82dedb32d2c69e8d90620b..194ceb9e890f83ee21d0aa3e8d32a41a75db1038 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/data/2010-11-20-gnash-kfreebsd.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2010-11-20-gnash-kfreebsd.txt
@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ Debian/Squeeze.  I hope this can help the developers in getting new
 releases out more often.</p>
 
 <p>As the developers want less main-stream build platforms tested to,
 releases out more often.</p>
 
 <p>As the developers want less main-stream build platforms tested to,

-I have considered setting up a
-<a href="http://www.debian.org/ports/kfreebsd-gnu/">Debian/kfreebsd</a>
+I have considered setting up a <a
+href="http://www.debian.org/ports/kfreebsd-gnu/">Debian/kfreebsd</a>

 machine as well.  I have also considered using the kfreebsd
 architecture in Debian as a file server in NUUG to get access to the 5
 TB zfs volume we currently use to store DV video.  Because of this, I
 machine as well.  I have also considered using the kfreebsd
 architecture in Debian as a file server in NUUG to get access to the 5
 TB zfs volume we currently use to store DV video.  Because of this, I


@@ -22,6 +22,6 @@ kfreebsd.  Installation went fairly smooth, thought I noticed some
 visual glitches in the cdebconf dialogs (black cursor left on the
 screen at random locations).  Have not gotten very far with the
 testing.  Noticed cfdisk did not work, but fdisk did so it was not a
 visual glitches in the cdebconf dialogs (black cursor left on the
 screen at random locations).  Have not gotten very far with the
 testing.  Noticed cfdisk did not work, but fdisk did so it was not a

-fatal problem.  Will have to spend some more time on it to see if it
-is useful as a file server for NUUG.  Will try to find time to set up
-a gnash buildbot slave on the Debian Edu/Skolelinux this weekend.</p>
+fatal problem.  Have to spend some more time on it to see if it is
+useful as a file server for NUUG.  Will try to find time to set up a
+gnash buildbot slave on the Debian Edu/Skolelinux this weekend.</p>