Improve translation.

diff --git a/blog/data/2012-04-26-video-htc-onex.txt b/blog/data/2012-04-26-video-htc-onex.txt
index 381c14ba7d771de43bffe5347df8ee927594844a..a24fb3bfe9d8a6231b160391f40ada7ea85dd4c9 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/data/2012-04-26-video-htc-onex.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2012-04-26-video-htc-onex.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 Title: HTC One X - Your video?  What do you mean?
 Tags: english, video, standard, multimedia, web, personvern, digistan
-Date: 2012-04-26 13:10
+Date: 2012-04-26 13:20
 
 <p>In <a href="http://www.idg.no/computerworld/article243690.ece">an
 article today</a> published by Computerworld Norway, the photographer
@@ -19,8 +19,8 @@ kan jeg KUN bruke dem privat</a>"
 <p>I quickly translated it to this English message:</p>
 
 <p><blockquote>
-"Arrogant user agreement: HTC can use MINE edited videos commercially.
-I can ONLY use them in private."
+"Arrogant user agreement: HTC can use MY edited videos
+commercially.  Although I can ONLY use them privately."
 </blockquote></p>
 
 <p>I've been unable to find the text of the license term myself, but