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@@ -8,28 +8,30 @@ project (Norwegian version of
 <a href="http://www.mysociety.org/">mySociety</a>), we have discovered
 a problem with the municipalities using
 <a href="http://www.zimbra.com/">Zimbra</a>.  When FiksGataMi send a
 <a href="http://www.mysociety.org/">mySociety</a>), we have discovered
 a problem with the municipalities using
 <a href="http://www.zimbra.com/">Zimbra</a>.  When FiksGataMi send a

-problem report to the government, the from: address is set to the
-address of the person reporting the problem, while envelope sender is
-set to the FiksGataMi contact address.  The intention is to make sure
-the municipality send any replies to the person reporting the problem,
-while any email delivery problems are sent to us in NUUG.  This work
-well in most cases, but not for Karmøy municipality using Zimbra.
-Karmøy is using the vacation message function in Zimbra to send an
-automatic reply to report that the message has been received, and this
-message is sent to the envelope sender and not the address in the
-From: header.</p>
+problem report to the government, the email From: address is set to
+the address of the person reporting the problem, while envelope sender
+is set to the FiksGataMi contact address.  The intention is to make
+sure the municipality send any replies to the person reporting the
+problem, while any email delivery problems are sent to us in NUUG.
+This work well in most cases, but not for Karmøy municipality using
+Zimbra.  Karmøy is using the vacation message function in Zimbra to
+send an automatic reply to report that the message has been received,
+and this message is sent to the envelope sender and not the address in
+the From: header.</p>

 
 

-<p>This causes the automatic message to go to NUUGs request-tracker
-instance instead of to the person reporting the problem.  We can not
-really change the envelope sender address, as this would make it
-impossible for us to discover when there are problems with the MTAs
-receiving problem reports.  We have been in contact with the people at
-Karmøy municipality, and they are willing to adjust Zimbra if
-something can be changed there to get a better behaviour.</p>
+<p>This causes the automatic message from Karmøy to go to NUUGs
+request-tracker instance instead of to the person reporting the
+problem.  We can not really change the envelope sender address, as
+this would make it impossible for us to discover when there are
+problems with the MTAs receiving problem reports.  We have been in
+contact with the people at Karmøy municipality, and they are willing
+to adjust Zimbra if something can be changed there to get a better
+behaviour.</p>

 
 <p>The default behaviour of Zimbra is as far as I can tell according
 to the specification in RFC 3834, which recommend that vacation
 messages are sent to the envelope sender and not to the From: address.
 But I wonder if it is possible to adjust or configure Zimbra to behave
 
 <p>The default behaviour of Zimbra is as far as I can tell according
 to the specification in RFC 3834, which recommend that vacation
 messages are sent to the envelope sender and not to the From: address.
 But I wonder if it is possible to adjust or configure Zimbra to behave

-differently.  Anyone know?  Please let us know at fiksgatami (at)
-nuug.no.</p>
+differently.  Anyone know?  Please let us know at
+<a href="http://lists.nuug.no/mailman/listinfo/fiksgatami">fiksgatami
+(at) nuug.no</a>.</p>