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@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ Tags: english, nuug, debian edu
 Date: 2010-08-03 23:30
 
 <p>The new roaming workstation profile in Debian Edu/Squeeze is fairly
 Date: 2010-08-03 23:30
 
 <p>The new roaming workstation profile in Debian Edu/Squeeze is fairly

-similar to the laptop setup am I working using Ubuntu for the
+similar to the laptop setup am I working on using Ubuntu for the

 University of Oslo, and just for the heck of it, I tested today how
 hard it would be to integrate that profile into the university
 infrastructure.  In this case, it is the university LDAP server,
 University of Oslo, and just for the heck of it, I tested today how
 hard it would be to integrate that profile into the university
 infrastructure.  In this case, it is the university LDAP server,


@@ -15,17 +15,20 @@ changed (/etc/sssd/sssd.conf, /etc/ldap.conf and
 /etc/mklocaluser.d/20-debian-edu-config) and one file had to be added
 (/usr/share/perl5/Debian/Edu_Local.pm), to get the client working.
 Most of the changes were to get the client to use the university LDAP
 /etc/mklocaluser.d/20-debian-edu-config) and one file had to be added
 (/usr/share/perl5/Debian/Edu_Local.pm), to get the client working.
 Most of the changes were to get the client to use the university LDAP

-and Kerberos server, but one was to change a hard coded DNS domain
-name in the mklocaluser hook.</p>
+for NSS and Kerberos server for PAM, but one was to change a hard
+coded DNS domain name in the mklocaluser hook from .intern to
+.uio.no.</p>

 
 <p>This testing was so encouraging, that I went ahead and adjusted the
 
 <p>This testing was so encouraging, that I went ahead and adjusted the

-Debian Edu scripts and setup in svn to centralise the roaming
+Debian Edu scripts and setup in subversion to centralise the roaming

 workstation setup a bit more and avoid the hardcoded DNS domain name,
 so that when I test this tomorrow, I expect to get away with modifying
 workstation setup a bit more and avoid the hardcoded DNS domain name,
 so that when I test this tomorrow, I expect to get away with modifying

-only /etc/sssd/sssd.conf and /etc/ldap.conf to get it to use a
-different set of servers.  The goal is to get the clients to have no
-hardcoded settings and fetch all their initial setup during
-installation and first boot, to allow them to be inserted also into
-environments where the default setup in Debian Edu has been changed or
-as with the university, where the environment is different but
-provides the protocols Debian Edu uses.</p>
+only /etc/sssd/sssd.conf and /etc/ldap.conf to get it to use the
+university servers.</p>
+
+<p>My goal is to get the clients to have no hardcoded settings and
+fetch all their initial setup during installation and first boot, to
+allow them to be inserted also into environments where the default
+setup in Debian Edu has been changed or as with the university, where
+the environment is different but provides the protocols Debian Edu
+uses.</p>