Better langauge.

diff --git a/blog/data/2012-10-22-amazon-steal.txt b/blog/data/2012-10-22-amazon-steal.txt
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--- a/blog/data/2012-10-22-amazon-steal.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2012-10-22-amazon-steal.txt
@@ -46,10 +46,11 @@ restored the account of the user, as reported by
 and <a href="http://nrk.no/kultur-og-underholdning/1.8368487">NRK</a>.
 Apparently public pressure work.  The story from Martin have seen
 several twitter messages per minute the last 24 hours, which is quite
 and <a href="http://nrk.no/kultur-og-underholdning/1.8368487">NRK</a>.
 Apparently public pressure work.  The story from Martin have seen
 several twitter messages per minute the last 24 hours, which is quite

-a lot, and is still drawing a lot of attention.  But even if the
+a lot, and is still drawing a lot of attention.  But even when the

 account is restored, the fundamental problem still exist.  I recommend
 reading two opinions from
 <a href="http://blogs.computerworlduk.com/simon-says/2012/10/rights-you-have-no-right-to-your-ebooks/index.htm">Simon
 Phipps</a> and
 <a href="http://blogs.computerworlduk.com/open-enterprise/2012/10/is-amazon-playing-fair/index.htm">Glen
 account is restored, the fundamental problem still exist.  I recommend
 reading two opinions from
 <a href="http://blogs.computerworlduk.com/simon-says/2012/10/rights-you-have-no-right-to-your-ebooks/index.htm">Simon
 Phipps</a> and
 <a href="http://blogs.computerworlduk.com/open-enterprise/2012/10/is-amazon-playing-fair/index.htm">Glen

-Moody</a> if you want to learn more about the fundamentals.</p>
+Moody</a> if you want to learn more about the fundamentals and more
+details about the original story.</p>