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 Title: The Story of Aron Swartz - Let us all weep!
 Tags: english, opphavsrett
-Date: 2015-10-08 11:40
+Date: 2015-10-08 12:00
 
 <p>The movie "<a href="http://www.takepart.com/internets-own-boy">The
 Internet's Own Boy: The Story of Aaron Swartz</a>" is both inspiring
-and depressing at the same time.  Every minute of this 1:45 long movie
-is inspiring in documenting how much impact a single person can have
-on improving the society and this world.  And it is depressing in
+and depressing at the same time.  The work of Aaron Swartz has
+inspired me in my work, and I am grateful of all the improvements he
+was able to initiate or complete.  I wish I am able to do as much good
+in my life as he did in his.  Every minute of this 1:45 long movie is
+inspiring in documenting how much impact a single person can have on
+improving the society and this world.  And it is depressing in
 documenting how the law enforcement of USA (and other countries) is
 corrupted to a point where they can push a bright kid to his death for
-downloading too many scientific articles.  Let us all weep.</p>
+downloading too many scientific articles.  Aron is dead.  Let us all
+weep.</p>
 
 <p>The movie is available on
 <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vXr-2hwTk58">Youtube</a>.</p>
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