Bedre språk.

diff --git a/blog/data/2018-03-13-made-with-cc-draft.txt b/blog/data/2018-03-13-made-with-cc-draft.txt
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--- a/blog/data/2018-03-13-made-with-cc-draft.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2018-03-13-made-with-cc-draft.txt
@@ -28,11 +28,11 @@ long story short, we ended up working on a Bokmål edition, and now the
 first rough translation is complete, thanks to the hard work of
 Ole-Erik Yrvin, Ingrid Yrvin, Allan Nordhøy and myself.  The first
 proof reading is almost done, and only the second and third proof
 first rough translation is complete, thanks to the hard work of
 Ole-Erik Yrvin, Ingrid Yrvin, Allan Nordhøy and myself.  The first
 proof reading is almost done, and only the second and third proof

-reading remains.  We will of course also need to make translated
-figures and a book cover.  Once it is done we will publish the book on
+reading remains.  We will also need to translate the 14 figures and
+create a book cover.  Once it is done we will publish the book on

 paper, as well as in PDF, ePub and possibly Mobi formats.</p>
 
 paper, as well as in PDF, ePub and possibly Mobi formats.</p>
 

-<p>The translation is done using
+<p>The translation is conducted using

 <a href="https://hosted.weblate.org/projects/madewithcc/translation/"the
 Weblate web based translation system</a>.  Please get in touch if you
 would like to help out with proof reading. :)</p>
 <a href="https://hosted.weblate.org/projects/madewithcc/translation/"the
 Weblate web based translation system</a>.  Please get in touch if you
 would like to help out with proof reading. :)</p>