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diff --git a/blog/data/2010-12-10-bitcoin.txt b/blog/data/2010-12-10-bitcoin.txt
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--- a/blog/data/2010-12-10-bitcoin.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2010-12-10-bitcoin.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ A blog post from
 <a href="http://webmink.com/2010/12/06/now-accepting-bitcoin/">Simon
 Phipps on bitcoin</a> reminded me about the project that a friend of
 mine mentioned earlier.  I decided to follow Simons example, and get
 <a href="http://webmink.com/2010/12/06/now-accepting-bitcoin/">Simon
 Phipps on bitcoin</a> reminded me about the project that a friend of
 mine mentioned earlier.  I decided to follow Simons example, and get

-involved with <a href="http://www.bitcoin.org/">bitcoins</a>.  I got
+involved with <a href="http://www.bitcoin.org/">BitCoin</a>.  I got

 some help from my friend to get it all running, and he even handed me
 some bitcoins to get started.  I even donated a few bitcoins to Simon
 for helping me to remember bitcoins.</p>
 some help from my friend to get it all running, and he even handed me
 some bitcoins to get started.  I even donated a few bitcoins to Simon
 for helping me to remember bitcoins.</p>


@@ -40,6 +40,7 @@ bitcoin at the time of writing).  Use
 <a href="http://www.bitcoinwatch.com/">BitcoinWatch</a> to keep an eye
 on the current exchange rates.</p>
 
 <a href="http://www.bitcoinwatch.com/">BitcoinWatch</a> to keep an eye
 on the current exchange rates.</p>
 

-<p>As an experiment, I've set up bitcoin and will be accepting donations
-to the address <b>15oWEoG9dUPovwmUL9KWAnYRtNJEkP1u1b</b>.  If you want
-to support me, send me some bitcoins. :)</p>
+<p>As an experiment, I have decided to set up bitcoind on one of my
+machines.  If you want to support my activity, please send Bitcoin
+donations to the address to the address
+<b>15oWEoG9dUPovwmUL9KWAnYRtNJEkP1u1b</b>.  Thank you!</p>