Better language.

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@@ -9,16 +9,16 @@ attacks</a> on Wikileak and
 <a href="http://www.salon.com/technology/dan_gillmor/2010/12/06/war_on_speech">free
 speech</a>, it has become obvious that paypal, visa and mastercard can
 not be trusted to handle money transactions.
-<a href="http://webmink.com/2010/12/06/now-accepting-bitcoin/">A blog
-post from Simon Phipps on bitcoin</a> reminded me about the project
-that a friend of mine mentioned earlier.  I decided to follow Simons
-example, and get involved with
-<a href="http://www.bitcoin.org/">bitcoins</a>.  I got some help from
-my friend to get it all running, and he even handed me some bitcoins
-to get started.  I even donated a few bitcoins to Simon for helping me
-to remember bitcoins.</p>
+A blog post from
+<a href="http://webmink.com/2010/12/06/now-accepting-bitcoin/">Simon
+Phipps on bitcoin</a> reminded me about the project that a friend of
+mine mentioned earlier.  I decided to follow Simons example, and get
+involved with <a href="http://www.bitcoin.org/">bitcoins</a>.  I got
+some help from my friend to get it all running, and he even handed me
+some bitcoins to get started.  I even donated a few bitcoins to Simon
+for helping me to remember bitcoins.</p>
 
-<p>So, what is bitcoins, you probably wonder.  It is a digital
+<p>So, what is bitcoins, you probably wonder?  It is a digital
 crypto-currency, decentralised and handled using peer-to-peer
 networks.  It allow anonymous transactions and prohibit central
 control over the transactions, making it impossible for governments
@@ -40,6 +40,6 @@ bitcoin at the time of writing).  Use
 <a href="http://www.bitcoinwatch.com/">BitcoinWatch</a> to keep an eye
 on the current exchange rates.</p>
 
-<p>As an example, I've set up bitcoin and will be accepting donations
+<p>As an experiment, I've set up bitcoin and will be accepting donations
 to the address <b>15oWEoG9dUPovwmUL9KWAnYRtNJEkP1u1b</b>.  If you want
 to support me, send me some bitcoins. :)</p>