Improve language.

diff --git a/blog/data/2010-06-13-debian-upgrades.txt b/blog/data/2010-06-13-debian-upgrades.txt
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--- a/blog/data/2010-06-13-debian-upgrades.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2010-06-13-debian-upgrades.txt
@@ -27,11 +27,12 @@ too surprising.</p>
 
 <p>I guess the removal of xorg during upgrades should be investigated
 and avoided, and perhaps others as well.  Here are the complete list
-of removals.  The complete logs is available from the URL above.  Note
-if you want to repeat these tests, that the upgrade test for
-kde+apt-get hung in the tasksel setup because of dpkg asking conffile
-questions.  No idea why.  I worked around it by using '<tt>echo >>
-/proc/<em>pidofdpkg</em>/fd/0</tt>' to tell dpkg to continue.</p>
+of planned removals.  The complete logs is available from the URL
+above.  Note if you want to repeat these tests, that the upgrade test
+for kde+apt-get hung in the tasksel setup because of dpkg asking
+conffile questions.  No idea why.  I worked around it by using
+'<tt>echo >> /proc/<em>pidofdpkg</em>/fd/0</tt>' to tell dpkg to
+continue.</p>
 
 <p><b>apt-get gnome 72</b>
 <br>bluez-gnome cupsddk-drivers deskbar-applet gnome