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@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-Title: The Life and death of a laptop battery
-Tags: english
+Title: The life and death of a laptop battery
+Tags: english, debian

 Date: 2015-09-24 20:00
 
 <p>When I get a new laptop, the battery life time of the lap top at
 Date: 2015-09-24 20:00
 
 <p>When I get a new laptop, the battery life time of the lap top at


@@ -10,18 +10,20 @@ Because of this, when I got a new Thinkpad X230 laptop almost two
 years ago, I decided to monitor its state to have more hard facts when
 the battery started to fail.</p>
 
 years ago, I decided to monitor its state to have more hard facts when
 the battery started to fail.</p>
 

+<img src="http://people.skolelinux.org/pere/blog/images/2015-09-24-laptop-battery-graph.png"/>
+

 <p>First I tried to find a sensible Debian package to record the
 battery status, assuming that this must be a problem already handled
 by someone else.  I found
 <p>First I tried to find a sensible Debian package to record the
 battery status, assuming that this must be a problem already handled
 by someone else.  I found

-<ahref="https://tracker.debian.org/pkg/battery-stats">battery-stats</a>,
+<a href="https://tracker.debian.org/pkg/battery-stats">battery-stats</a>,

 which collects statistics from the battery, but it was completely
 broken.  I sent a few suggestions to the maintainer, but decided to
 write my own collector as a shell script while I waited for feedback
 from him.  Via
 which collects statistics from the battery, but it was completely
 broken.  I sent a few suggestions to the maintainer, but decided to
 write my own collector as a shell script while I waited for feedback
 from him.  Via

-<ahref="http://www.ifweassume.com/2013/08/the-de-evolution-of-my-laptop-battery.html">a
+<a href="http://www.ifweassume.com/2013/08/the-de-evolution-of-my-laptop-battery.html">a

 blog post about the battery development on a MacBook Air</a> I also
 discovered
 blog post about the battery development on a MacBook Air</a> I also
 discovered

-<ahref="https://github.com/jradavenport/batlog.git">batlog</a>, not
+<a href="https://github.com/jradavenport/batlog.git">batlog</a>, not

 available in Debian.</p>
 
 <p>I started my collector 2013-07-15, and it has been collecting
 available in Debian.</p>
 
 <p>I started my collector 2013-07-15, and it has been collecting


@@ -73,8 +75,12 @@ done
 change in the power status (power plug in or out), and when going into
 and out of hibernation and suspend.  In addition, it collect a value
 every 10 minutes.  This make it possible for me know when the battery
 change in the power status (power plug in or out), and when going into
 and out of hibernation and suspend.  In addition, it collect a value
 every 10 minutes.  This make it possible for me know when the battery

-is discharging, charging and how the maximum charge change over
-time.  The log file look like this:</p>
+is discharging, charging and how the maximum charge change over time.
+The code for the Debian package
+<a href="https://github.com/petterreinholdtsen/battery-status">is now
+available on github</a>.</p>
+
+<p>The collected log file look like this:</p>

 
 <pre>
 timestamp,manufacturer,model_name,technology,serial_number,energy_full,energy_full_design,energy_now,cycle_count,status,
 
 <pre>
 timestamp,manufacturer,model_name,technology,serial_number,energy_full,energy_full_design,energy_now,cycle_count,status,


@@ -84,24 +90,24 @@ timestamp,manufacturer,model_name,technology,serial_number,energy_full,energy_fu
 1443090601,LGC,45N1025,Li-ion,974,4900000,62160000,4900000,0,Full,
 </pre>
 
 1443090601,LGC,45N1025,Li-ion,974,4900000,62160000,4900000,0,Full,
 </pre>
 

-<p>I even wrote a small script to create a graph of the charge
-development over time.  This show the slow death of my Lenovo Thinkpad
-X230 laptop battery:</p>
-
-<img src="images/2015-09-24-laptop-battery-graph.png"/>
+<p>I wrote a small script to create a graph of the charge development
+over time.  This graph depicted above show the slow death of mylaptop
+battery.</p>

 
 

-<p>But why is this happening?  Why are my laptop batteries dying,
-while the batteries of space probes and satellites keep working year
-after year.  If we are to believe
-<ahref="http://batteryuniversity.com/learn/article/how_to_prolong_lithium_based_batteries">Battery
-University</a>, the fix is to not charge the Lithium-ion batteries to
-100% all the time, but to stay below 90% of full charge most of the
-time.  I've been told that the Tesla electric cars
-<ahref="http://my.teslamotors.com/de_CH/forum/forums/battery-charge-limit">limit
+<p>But why is this happening?  Why are my laptop batteries always
+dying in a year or two, while the batteries of space probes and
+satellites keep working year after year.  If we are to believe
+<a href="http://batteryuniversity.com/learn/article/how_to_prolong_lithium_based_batteries">Battery
+University</a>, the cause is me charging the battery whenever I have a
+chance, and the fix is to not charge the Lithium-ion batteries to 100%
+all the time, but to stay below 90% of full charge most of the time.
+I've been told that the Tesla electric cars
+<a href="http://my.teslamotors.com/de_CH/forum/forums/battery-charge-limit">limit

 the charge of their batteries to 80%</a>, with the option to charge to
 the charge of their batteries to 80%</a>, with the option to charge to

-100% when preparing for a longer trip (not that I would want a Tesla,
-but that is another story), which I guess is the option we should have
-for laptops on Linux too.</p>
+100% when preparing for a longer trip (not that I would want a car
+like Tesla where rights to privacy is abandoned, but that is another
+story), which I guess is the option we should have for laptops on
+Linux too.</p>

 
 <p>Is there a way with Linux to tell the battery to stop charging at
 80%, unless requested to charge to 100% once in preparation for a
 
 <p>Is there a way with Linux to tell the battery to stop charging at
 80%, unless requested to charge to 100% once in preparation for a