Improve.

diff --git a/blog/data/2015-09-03-free-culture-cover.txt b/blog/data/2015-09-03-free-culture-cover.txt
index 384abf163d9f945c6f1e17d379a4a9d2f9076d69..58c769dd2329afe93cc6ae7fcd153f2b64b58748 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/data/2015-09-03-free-culture-cover.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2015-09-03-free-culture-cover.txt
@@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ Norwegian cover will look the same, but with the texts and bar code
 replaced with the Norwegian version.</p>
 
 <p>The book is very close to being ready for publication, and I expect
-to upload the final draft to lulu and order a final proof reading copy
-to verify that everything look like it should before allowing everyone
-to order their own copy of Free Culture, in English or Norwegian
-Bokmål.  I'm just waiting for the productive proof readers to complete
-their work.</p>
+to upload the final draft to Lulu in the next few days and order a
+final proof reading copy to verify that everything look like it should
+before allowing everyone to order their own copy of Free Culture, in
+English or Norwegian Bokmål.  I'm waiting to give the the productive
+proof readers a chance to complete their work.</p>