Improve language.

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@@ -7,10 +7,10 @@ thought-provoking collection of essays by Cory Doctorow, on topics
 touching copyright, virtual worlds, the future of man when the
 conscience mind can be duplicated into a computer and many more. The
 book titled "Content: Selected Essays on Technology, Creativity,
-Copyright, and the Future of the Future" is available almost without
+Copyright, and the Future of the Future" is available with few
 restrictions on the web, for example from
 <a href="http://craphound.com/content/">his own site</a>. I read the
 epub-version from
 <a href="http://www.feedbooks.com/book/2883">feedbooks</a> using
-<a href="http://www.fbreader.org/">fbreader</a> and n810. I strongly
-recommend this book.</p>
+<a href="http://www.fbreader.org/">fbreader</a> and my N810. I
+strongly recommend this book.</p>