Cleanup.

diff --git a/blog/data/2015-09-03-free-culture-cover.txt b/blog/data/2015-09-03-free-culture-cover.txt
index d1a2480adad121121c862b5a93c0f479d6c46bac..9766c7e006fb883733391c109b518e17ec53d1f1 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/data/2015-09-03-free-culture-cover.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2015-09-03-free-culture-cover.txt
@@ -1,22 +1,25 @@
-Title: Book cover for Free Culture book ready for printing
+Title: Book cover for the Free Culture book finally done
 Tags: english, docbook, freeculture
 Date: 2015-09-03 20:40
 
 <p>Creating a good looking book cover proved harder than I expected.
 I wanted to create a cover looking similar to the original cover of
-the <ahref="">Free Culture</a> book we are translating to Norwegian,
-and I wanted it in vector format for high resolution printing when I
-get the book printed on paper.  But my inkscape knowledge were not
-nearly good enough to pull that off.
+the
+<a href="https://github.com/petterreinholdtsen/free-culture-lessig">Free
+Culture</a> book we are translating to Norwegian, and I wanted it in
+vector format for high resolution printing when I get the book printed
+on paper.  But my inkscape knowledge were not nearly good enough to
+pull that off.
 
 <p>But thanks to the great inkscape community, I was able to wrap up
-the cover yesterday evening.  I asked on the #inkscape IRC channel on
-Freenode for help and clues, and Marc Jeanmougin (Mc-) volunteered to
-try to recreate it based on the PDF of the cover from the HTML
+the cover yesterday evening.  I asked on the
+<a href="irc://irc.freenode.net/%23inkscape">#inkscape IRC channel</a>
+on Freenode for help and clues, and Marc Jeanmougin (Mc-) volunteered
+to try to recreate it based on the PDF of the cover from the HTML
 version.  Not only did he create a
-<ahref="https://marc.jeanmougin.fr/share/copy1.svg ">SVG document with
+<a href="https://marc.jeanmougin.fr/share/copy1.svg ">SVG document with
 the original and his vector version side by side</a>, he even provided
-an <ahref="https://marc.jeanmougin.fr/share/out-1.ogv">instruction
+an <a href="https://marc.jeanmougin.fr/share/out-1.ogv">instruction
 video</a> explaining how he did it</a>.  But the instruction video is
 not easy to follow. The video is a recording on how he did it, and he
 is obviously very experienced as the menu selections are very quick
@@ -25,7 +28,7 @@ can't be seen on the video, but it give a good idea about the inkscape
 operations to use to create the stripes with the embossed copyright
 sign in the center.</p>
 
-<p>I took his SVG file, copied the vector image and resized it to fit
+<p>I took his SVG file, copied the vector image and re-sized it to fit
 on the cover I was drawing.  I am happy with the end result, and the
 current draft look like this:</p>
 
@@ -33,15 +36,13 @@ current draft look like this:</p>
 
 <p>I am not quite sure about the text on the back, but guess it will
 do.  I picked three quotes from the official site for the book, and
-hope it will do to trigger the interest of potential readers.</p>
+hope it will work to trigger the interest of potential readers.  The
+Norwegian cover will look the same, but with the texts and bar code
+replaced with the Norwegian version.</p>
 
 <p>The book is very close to being ready for publication, and I expect
 to upload the final draft to lulu and order a final proof reading copy
 to verify that everything look like it should before allowing everyone
 to order their own copy of Free Culture, in English or Norwegian
-Bokmål.</p>
-
-
-
-
-Last evening, I was</p>
+Bokmål.  I'm just waiting for the productive proof readers to complete
+their work.</p>