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@@ -46,12 +46,13 @@ but probably on planet.debian.org. As I have been working for a
 school, I have interest in this type of project.
 
 <p>The school I am involved in is a school for "children" between 14
-and 18 years old.  French government has recommended free software
-since 2012 (but is far away from applying this to itself), so while
-the school computers are still using Windows, all computer have the
-classic set of free software: Firefox ESR, LibreOffice (with the
-excellent extension Grammalecte that indicates French grammatical
-errors), SumatraPDF, Audacity, 7zip, KeePass2, VLC, GIMP, Inkscape…
+and 18 years old.  The French government has recommended free software
+since 2012, but they do not always use free software themselves.  The
+school computers are still using the Windows operating system, but all
+of them have the classic set of free software: Firefox ESR,
+LibreOffice (with the excellent extension Grammalecte that indicates
+French grammatical errors), SumatraPDF, Audacity, 7zip, KeePass2, VLC,
+GIMP, Inkscape…
 
 <p><strong>What do you see as the advantages of Skolelinux / Debian
 Edu?</strong></p>