Clearify channel revenue.

diff --git a/blog/data/2016-08-05-free-culture-sales.txt b/blog/data/2016-08-05-free-culture-sales.txt
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@@ -31,13 +31,14 @@ books was sold for USD $19.99 between 2016-01-01 and 2016-07-31:</p>
 <p>The books are available both from Lulu.com and from large book
 stores like Amazon and Barnes&Noble.  Most revenue, around $10 per
 book, is sent to the Creative Commons project when the book is sold
-directly by Lulu.com.  The summary from Lulu tell me 10 books was sold
-via the Amazon channel, 10 via Ingram (what is this?) and 4 directly
-by Lulu.  And Lulu.com tells me that the revenue sent so far this year
-is USD $101.42.  No idea what kind of sales numbers to expect, so I do
-not know if that is a good amount of sales for a 10 year old book or
-not.  But it make me happy that the buyers find the book, and I hope
-they enjoy reading it as much as I did.</p>
+directly by Lulu.com.  The other channels give less revenue.  The
+summary from Lulu tell me 10 books was sold via the Amazon channel, 10
+via Ingram (what is this?) and 4 directly by Lulu.  And Lulu.com tells
+me that the revenue sent so far this year is USD $101.42.  No idea
+what kind of sales numbers to expect, so I do not know if that is a
+good amount of sales for a 10 year old book or not.  But it make me
+happy that the buyers find the book, and I hope they enjoy reading it
+as much as I did.</p>
 
 <p>The ebook edition is available for free from
 <a href="https://github.com/petterreinholdtsen/free-culture-lessig">Github</a>.</p>