Adjust language.

diff --git a/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt b/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt
index f3196e47624292ec68ad594cb5bffdc6c40f250b..acd9d1818077daa0afef1867a91094270bcf61ca 100644 (file)
--- a/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt
@@ -7,11 +7,11 @@ it will to remove rights I otherwise had or accept unreasonable terms
 undermining my privacy, I choose away the service.  I simply do not
 have the conscience to accept terms I have no indention of upholding.
 But how are the system and service providers to know how many people
 undermining my privacy, I choose away the service.  I simply do not
 have the conscience to accept terms I have no indention of upholding.
 But how are the system and service providers to know how many people

-they scared away?  Normally I just quietly walk away.  But todya, I
+they scared away?  Normally I just quietly walk away.  But today, I

 tried a new approach.  I sent the following email (removing the
 specifics, as I am not out to take the specific service in question)
 tried a new approach.  I sent the following email (removing the
 specifics, as I am not out to take the specific service in question)

-to the service provider I decided to drop, to at least give them one
-data point on how many users are unhappy with their terms:</p>
+to the service provider I decided to not use, to at least give them
+one data point on how many users are unhappy with their terms:</p>

 
 <blockquote>
 From: Petter Reinholdtsen
 
 <blockquote>
 From: Petter Reinholdtsen