Adjust English paragraph about copyright and origin on request from the author.

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+++ b/A_radical_proposal_to_keep_your_personal_data_safe.md
@@ -117,8 +117,7 @@ system GNU.
 
 Copyright 2018 Richard Stallman. Released under [Creative Commons
 Attribution NoDerivatives License
 
 Copyright 2018 Richard Stallman. Released under [Creative Commons
 Attribution NoDerivatives License

-4.0](https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nd/4.0/).
-
-Originally published by [The
+4.0](https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nd/4.0/).  The original
+English version was published in [The

 Guardian](https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2018/apr/03/facebook-abusing-data-law-privacy-big-tech-surveillance)
 2018-04-03.
 Guardian](https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2018/apr/03/facebook-abusing-data-law-privacy-big-tech-surveillance)
 2018-04-03.