From: Petter Reinholdtsen <pere@hungry.com>
Date: Mon, 20 Jul 2015 23:04:58 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: Improve Colophone text.
X-Git-Tag: edition-2015-10-10~423
X-Git-Url: https://pere.pagekite.me/gitweb/text-free-culture-lessig.git/commitdiff_plain/5f0ea47ffe3004564e947c2eeb3ff63553209f45

Improve Colophone text.
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diff --git a/freeculture.xml b/freeculture.xml
index 147de07..088bfee 100644
--- a/freeculture.xml
+++ b/freeculture.xml
@@ -15656,13 +15656,12 @@ courtesy of the office of FCC Commissioner, Michael J. Copps.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-The source of this version of the text is written using DocBook
+The source of this version of the book is written using DocBook
 notation and the other formats are derived from the DocBook source.
 The DocBook source is based on a DocBook XML version created by Hans
-Schou, and extended with formatting and index references by Petter
-Reinholdtsen.  The source files of this book is available as
-<ulink url="https://github.com/petterreinholdtsen/free-culture-lessig">a
-github project</ulink>.
+Schou, and extended by Petter Reinholdtsen with formatting and index
+references.  The source files for this book are available from
+<ulink url="https://github.com/petterreinholdtsen/free-culture-lessig"/>.
 </para>
 
 <para>