From: Petter Reinholdtsen <pere@hungry.com>
Date: Sat, 1 Aug 2015 21:38:13 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Rephrase the CC info a bit.
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Rephrase the CC info a bit.
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diff --git a/freeculture.xml b/freeculture.xml
index b69ebc5..2673142 100644
--- a/freeculture.xml
+++ b/freeculture.xml
@@ -92,10 +92,9 @@
    </para>
 
    <para>
-This version of <citetitle>Free Culture</citetitle> is licensed under
-a Creative Commons license. This license permits non-commercial use of
-this work, so long as attribution is given.  For more information
-about the license visit
+This book is licensed under a Creative Commons license. This license
+permits non-commercial use of this work, so long as attribution is
+given.  For more information about the license visit
 <ulink url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/</ulink>
    </para>
  </legalnotice>
@@ -15653,10 +15652,9 @@ Copyright &copy; 2004 Lawrence Lessig.  Some rights reserved.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-This version of <citetitle>Free Culture</citetitle> is licensed under
-a Creative Commons license. This license permits non-commercial use of
-this work, so long as attribution is given.  For more information
-about the license visit
+This book is licensed under a Creative Commons license. This license
+permits non-commercial use of this work, so long as attribution is
+given.  For more information about the license visit
 <ulink url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/1.0/</ulink>
 </para>