From: Petter Reinholdtsen <pere@hungry.com>
Date: Sat, 5 Sep 2015 19:50:45 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: Improve language.
X-Git-Tag: edition-2015-10-10~175
X-Git-Url: https://pere.pagekite.me/gitweb/text-free-culture-lessig.git/commitdiff_plain/03daeffef5f4380cbef5b510f504e5aabf08945e?ds=sidebyside

Improve language.
---

diff --git a/freeculture.xml b/freeculture.xml
index 55462ec..8572976 100644
--- a/freeculture.xml
+++ b/freeculture.xml
@@ -15664,12 +15664,12 @@ still available after 11 years.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-I am also very grateful for my family for their patience with me in
-this project.
+In addition to these great contributors, I am very grateful to Mari
+and my family for their patience with me in this project.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-&mdash; Petter Reinholdtsen, Oslo 2015-09-04
+&mdash; Petter Reinholdtsen, Oslo 2015-09-07
   </para>
 
 </chapter>