From dde9782c422f04468257a1e21d6c10da3449c84c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Petter Reinholdtsen <pere@hungry.com>
Date: Sat, 23 Feb 2008 17:03:27 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Updates.

---
 .../200802-bootsequence/200802-bootsequence.html | 16 +++++++---------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/mypapers/200802-bootsequence/200802-bootsequence.html b/mypapers/200802-bootsequence/200802-bootsequence.html
index d5f922ff2c..5dc5b9ddf1 100644
--- a/mypapers/200802-bootsequence/200802-bootsequence.html
+++ b/mypapers/200802-bootsequence/200802-bootsequence.html
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ based, the boot sequence is no longer sequencial.<p>
 <li>init then run in sequence all start scripts in /etc/rcX.d/, with
   <tt>start</tt> as their argument.</li>
 
-<li>Runlevels 0 and 6 are not behaving as you expect.
+<li>Runlevels 0 and 6 are not behaving as you would expect.
 
 </ul>
 
@@ -279,8 +279,8 @@ success: Boot system successfully converted
 <p>It is possible to enable concurrent booting, running boot scripts
   in parallel (CONCURRENCY=startpar in /etc/default/rcS)</p>
 
-<p>Might even speed up the boot and shutdown (initial benchmark show
-  speedup only by reordering based on dependencies)</p>
+<p>Might even speed up boot and shutdown (initial benchmark shows
+  speedup by just reordering based on dependencies).</p>
 
 <h2>Disabling dependency based boot sequencing</h2>
 
@@ -415,10 +415,10 @@ XXX More
 <p>Should update Debian policy to reflect dependency based boot
   sequencing.
 
-<p>Two insserv bugs to fix:
+<p>Two insserv bugs left to fix:
 <ul>
 <li>Will sometimes add  unwanted stop symlinks (<a href="http://bugs.debian.org/464017">#464017</a>).
-<li>Will fail fail on "fake" loops. (<a href="http://bugs.debian.org/458582">#458582</a>)
+<li>Will fail on "fake" loops as well as real loops. (<a href="http://bugs.debian.org/458582">#458582</a>)
 </ul></p>
 
 <h2>Tracking status</h2>
@@ -426,9 +426,7 @@ XXX More
 <p>The current status is tracked in the svn repository for insserv.  Run
 <br><tt>debian/rules missing-overrides</tt> or
 <br><tt>debian/rules missing-by-popcon</tt>
-<br>
-in the source directory to
-see the current status.
+<br>in the source directory to see the current status.
 
 <p>See also wiki pages with documentation and status:
 
@@ -436,7 +434,7 @@ see the current status.
 <li>http://wiki.debian.org/LSBInitScripts
 <li>http://wiki.debian.org/LSBInitScripts/DependencyBasedBoot
 <li>Repository: <tt>svn+ssh://svn.debian.org/svn/initscripts-ng/trunk/src/insserv</tt>
-<ul>
+</ul>
 
     <h2>Thank you very much</h2>
 
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