From 0f9a81f6141df924d07483b8ff67057138695a4b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Petter Reinholdtsen <pere@hungry.com>
Date: Thu, 9 Dec 2010 20:03:14 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Improve language.

---
 blog/data/2010-12-10-bitcoin.txt | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/blog/data/2010-12-10-bitcoin.txt b/blog/data/2010-12-10-bitcoin.txt
index adfed05f79..3aa121ddf7 100644
--- a/blog/data/2010-12-10-bitcoin.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2010-12-10-bitcoin.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ A blog post from
 <a href="http://webmink.com/2010/12/06/now-accepting-bitcoin/">Simon
 Phipps on bitcoin</a> reminded me about the project that a friend of
 mine mentioned earlier.  I decided to follow Simons example, and get
-involved with <a href="http://www.bitcoin.org/">bitcoins</a>.  I got
+involved with <a href="http://www.bitcoin.org/">BitCoin</a>.  I got
 some help from my friend to get it all running, and he even handed me
 some bitcoins to get started.  I even donated a few bitcoins to Simon
 for helping me to remember bitcoins.</p>
@@ -40,6 +40,7 @@ bitcoin at the time of writing).  Use
 <a href="http://www.bitcoinwatch.com/">BitcoinWatch</a> to keep an eye
 on the current exchange rates.</p>
 
-<p>As an experiment, I've set up bitcoin and will be accepting donations
-to the address <b>15oWEoG9dUPovwmUL9KWAnYRtNJEkP1u1b</b>.  If you want
-to support me, send me some bitcoins. :)</p>
+<p>As an experiment, I have decided to set up bitcoind on one of my
+machines.  If you want to support my activity, please send Bitcoin
+donations to the address to the address
+<b>15oWEoG9dUPovwmUL9KWAnYRtNJEkP1u1b</b>.  Thank you!</p>
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