From: Petter Reinholdtsen Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2015 08:27:35 +0000 (+0100) Subject: Proof reading. X-Git-Url: https://pere.pagekite.me/gitweb/homepage.git/commitdiff_plain/c3042315a2a954c57a725f91b89a79c878c5c866?ds=inline Proof reading. --- diff --git a/blog/draft/2015-internet-governance.txt b/blog/draft/2015-internet-governance.txt index 89267f8ebe..89bd8c63cf 100644 --- a/blog/draft/2015-internet-governance.txt +++ b/blog/draft/2015-internet-governance.txt @@ -1,15 +1,14 @@ Title: Is Pentagon deciding the Norwegian negotiating position on Internet governance? Tags: english -Date: 2015-10-23 12:10 +Date: 2015-11-03 12:00

In Norway, all government offices are required by law to keep a -list of every document or letter going in and out of the office. -Internal notes should also be listed. The document list (called mail +list of every document or letter arriving and leaving their offices. +Internal notes should also be documented. The document list (called a mail journal - "postjournal" in Norwegian) is public information and thanks to the Norwegian Freedom of Information Act (Offentleglova) the mail journal is available for everyone. Most offices even publish the mail -journal on their web pages, as PDFs or tables in web pages. The state -level offices even have a shared web based search service (called +journal on their web pages, as PDFs or tables in web pages. The state-level offices even have a shared web based search service (called Offentlig Elektronisk Postjournal - OEP) to make it possible to search the entries in the list. Not all journal entries show up on OEP, and the search service is hard to @@ -18,16 +17,15 @@ journal entries .

In 2012 I came across a document in the mail journal for the Norwegian Ministry of Transport and Communications on OEP that -triggered my interest. The title of the document was +piqued my interest. The title of the document was "Internet -Governance and how it affect national security" (Norwegian: +Governance and how it affects national security" (Norwegian: "Internet Governance og påvirkning på nasjonal sikkerhet"). The document date was 2012-05-22, and it was said to be sent from the "Permanent Mission of Norway to the United Nations". I asked for a -copy, but my request was rejected with a reference to the law -paragraph said to authorize them to reject it +copy, but my request was rejected with a reference to a legal clause said to authorize them to reject it (offentleglova § 20, -letter c) and an explanation that the document was except because +letter c) and an explanation that the document was exempt because of foreign policy interests as it contained information related to the Norwegian negotiating position, negotiating strategies or similar. I was told the information in the document related to the ongoing @@ -43,7 +41,7 @@ including Norway refused to sign the new treaty). It seemed reasonable to believe talks were still going on a few weeks later. Norway was represented at the ITU meeting by two authorities, the Norwegian Communications Authority and the Ministry of Transport and -Communications. This might be the reason the letter was send to the +Communications. This might be the reason the letter was sent to the ministry. As I was unable to find the document in the mail journal of any Norwegian UN mission, I asked the ministry who had sent the document to the ministry, and was told that it was the Deputy @@ -61,14 +59,14 @@ the Permanent Mission of Norway in Geneva as the sender for a copy, to see if they both agreed that it should be withheld from the public. The ministry upheld its rejection quoting the same law reference as before, while the permanent mission rejected it quoting a -different law reference +different clause (offentleglova § 20 -letter b), thus claiming that they were required to keep the -content of the document from the public because they contained +letter b), claiming that they were required to keep the +content of the document from the public because it contained information given to Norway with the expressed or implied expectation that the information should not be made public. I asked the permanent mission for an explanation, and was told that the document contained -an account from a meeting held in Pentagon for a limited group of NATO +an account from a meeting held in the Pentagon for a limited group of NATO nations where the organiser of the meeting did not intend the content of the meeting to be publicly known. They explained that giving me a copy might cause Norway to not get access to similar information in @@ -82,12 +80,12 @@ author of the document, now realising that it was not same as the ministry upheld its rejection but told me the name of the author of the document. According to a -government report the author were with the Permanent Mission of +government report the author was with the Permanent Mission of Norway in New York a bit more than a year later (2014-09-22), so I guessed that might be the office responsible for writing and sending the report initially and asked -them for a copy but obviously missed as I was told that the +them for a copy but I was obviously wrong as I was told that the document was unknown to them and that the author did not work there when the document was written. Next, I asked the Permanent Mission of Norway in Geneva and the Foreign Ministry to reconsider and at least