From: Petter Reinholdtsen <pere@hungry.com>
Date: Sat, 2 Nov 2013 21:32:08 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Improve text.
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Improve text.
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diff --git a/blog/data/2013-11-02-debian-init-d-script.txt b/blog/data/2013-11-02-debian-init-d-script.txt
index d760aac9b9..4b044c0f87 100644
--- a/blog/data/2013-11-02-debian-init-d-script.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2013-11-02-debian-init-d-script.txt
@@ -184,7 +184,9 @@ esac
 </pre></p>
 
 <p>It is based on /etc/init.d/skeleton, and could be improved quite a
-lot.  I did not try hard to optimize it nor make it more robust.</p>
+lot.  I did not really polish the approach, so it might not always
+work out of the box, but you get the idea.  I did not try very hard to
+optimize it nor make it more robust either.</p>
 
 <p>A better argument for switching init system in Debian than reducing
 the size of init scripts (which is a good thing to do anyway), is to