From: Petter Reinholdtsen <pere@hungry.com>
Date: Sat, 7 Dec 2019 20:11:26 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: Juster teksten litt.
X-Git-Url: https://pere.pagekite.me/gitweb/homepage.git/commitdiff_plain/782cdcfc50bc108aaaa57b24c286628992988061

Juster teksten litt.
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diff --git a/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt b/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt
index 98f96b7add..f3196e4762 100644
--- a/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2019-12-07-terms-turn-users-away.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 Title: When terms and policy turn users away
 Tags: english, personvern
-Date: 2019-12-07 21:10
+Date: 2019-12-07 21:15
 
 <p>When asked to accept terms of use and privacy policies that state
 it will to remove rights I otherwise had or accept unreasonable terms
@@ -36,5 +36,6 @@ asked to sign away my right to reverse engineer.</p>
 </blockquote>
 
 <p>I do not expect much to come out of it, but sharing it here in case
-others want to give it a try too.  If the terms scare away enough
-people, perhaps they will be improved...</p>
+others want to give something similar a try too.  If companies
+discover their terms scare away enough people, perhaps they will be
+improved...</p>