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 Title: 12 years of outages - summarised by Stuart Kendrick
 Tags: english, nuug, standard
 Title: 12 years of outages - summarised by Stuart Kendrick
 Tags: english, nuug, standard

-Date: 2012-10-26 10:20
+Date: 2012-10-26 14:20

 
 

-<p>I work at the <ahref="http://www.uio.no/">University of Oslo</a>
+<p>I work at the <a href="http://www.uio.no/">University of Oslo</a>

 looking after the computers, mostly on the unix side, but in general
 all over the place.  I am also a member (and currently leader) of
 looking after the computers, mostly on the unix side, but in general
 all over the place.  I am also a member (and currently leader) of

-<ahref="http://www.nuug.no/">the NUUG association</a>, which in turn
-make me a member of <ahref="http://www.usenix.org/">USENIX</a>.  NUUG
+<a href="http://www.nuug.no/">the NUUG association</a>, which in turn
+make me a member of <a href="http://www.usenix.org/">USENIX</a>.  NUUG

 is an member organisation for us in Norway interested in free
 software, open standards and unix like operating systems, and USENIX
 is an member organisation for us in Norway interested in free
 software, open standards and unix like operating systems, and USENIX

-is a US based member organisation with similar targets.  I tend to
-distill it down to the simple statement that all the skilled computer
-people are members of NUUG, which while a goal is still not quite
-reflected in reality.  And thanks to these memberships, I get all
-issues of the great USENIX magazine
-<ahref="https://www.usenix.org/publications/login">;login:</a> in the
+is a US based member organisation with similar targets.  And thanks to
+these memberships, I get all issues of the great USENIX magazine
+<a href="https://www.usenix.org/publications/login">;login:</a> in the

 mail several times a year.  The magazine is great, and I read most of
 it every time.</p>
 
 <p>In the last issue of the USENIX magazine ;login:, there is an
 mail several times a year.  The magazine is great, and I read most of
 it every time.</p>
 
 <p>In the last issue of the USENIX magazine ;login:, there is an

-article by <ahref="http://www.skendric.com/">Stuart Kendrick</a> from
+article by <a href="http://www.skendric.com/">Stuart Kendrick</a> from

 Fred Hutchinson Cancer Research Center titled
 Fred Hutchinson Cancer Research Center titled

-<ahref="https://www.usenix.org/publications/login/october-2012-volume-37-number-5/what-takes-us-down">What
-Takes Us Down</a> (also
-<ahref="http://www.skendric.com/problem/incident-analysis/2012-06-30/What-Takes-Us-Down.pdf">available
+"<a href="https://www.usenix.org/publications/login/october-2012-volume-37-number-5/what-takes-us-down">What
+Takes Us Down</a>" (also
+<a href="http://www.skendric.com/problem/incident-analysis/2012-06-30/What-Takes-Us-Down.pdf">available

 from his own site</a>), where he report what he found when he
 processed the outage reports (both planned and unplanned) from the
 last twelve years and classified them according to cause, time of day,
 from his own site</a>), where he report what he found when he
 processed the outage reports (both planned and unplanned) from the
 last twelve years and classified them according to cause, time of day,


@@ -67,7 +64,7 @@ User Impact: All users on H2 will be isolated from the network during
             this work. Afterward, they will have gigabit
             connectivity.
 Technician:  [xxx]
             this work. Afterward, they will have gigabit
             connectivity.
 Technician:  [xxx]

-<blockquote><pre>
+</pre></blockquote>

 
 <p>He notes in his article that the date formats and other fields have
 been a bit too free form to make it easy to automatically process them
 
 <p>He notes in his article that the date formats and other fields have
 been a bit too free form to make it easy to automatically process them


@@ -80,7 +77,7 @@ be improved, read the article for the details.</p>
 <p>I find the idea of standardising outage messages seem to be such a
 good idea that I would like to get it implemented here at the
 university too.  We do register
 <p>I find the idea of standardising outage messages seem to be such a
 good idea that I would like to get it implemented here at the
 university too.  We do register

-<ahref="http://www.uio.no/tjenester/it/aktuelt/planlagte-tjenesteavbrudd/">planned
+<a href="http://www.uio.no/tjenester/it/aktuelt/planlagte-tjenesteavbrudd/">planned

 changes and outages in a calendar</a>, and report the to a mailing
 list, but we do not do so in a structured format and there is not a
 report to the same location for unplanned outages.  Perhaps something
 changes and outages in a calendar</a>, and report the to a mailing
 list, but we do not do so in a structured format and there is not a
 report to the same location for unplanned outages.  Perhaps something