Improve language.

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@@ -28,10 +28,11 @@ etc etc.  The article is a good read to get some empirical data on
 what kind of problems affect a data centre, but what really inspired
 me was the kind of reporting they had put in place since 2000.<p>
 
 what kind of problems affect a data centre, but what really inspired
 me was the kind of reporting they had put in place since 2000.<p>
 

-<p>The centre set up a mailing list, and send fairly standardised
-messages to this list when a outage was planned or when it already
-occurred.  Here is the two example from the article: First the
-unplanned outage:
+<p>The centre set up a mailing list, and started to send fairly
+standardised messages to this list when a outage was planned or when
+it already occurred, to announce the plan and get feedback on the
+assumtions on scope and user impact.  Here is the two example from the
+article: First the unplanned outage:

 
 <blockquote><pre>
 Subject:     Exchange 2003 Cluster Issues
 
 <blockquote><pre>
 Subject:     Exchange 2003 Cluster Issues