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@@ -16,12 +16,13 @@ a French and Norwegian translation of the classic
 <a href="http://www.free-culture.cc/">Free Culture book</a> by the
 founder of the Creative Commons movement, Lawrence Lessig.  A bit less
 known is the fact that due to the way I created the translations,
-using docbook and po4a, and also recreated the English original.  And
+using docbook and po4a, I also recreated the English original.  And
 because I already had created a new the PDF edition, I published it
-too.  The revenue from the book is sent to the Creative Commons
-Corporation.  So I do not earn any money from the project, I just earn
-the warm fuzzy feeling that the text is available for a wider audience
-and more people can learn why the Creative Commons is needed.</p>
+too.  The revenue from the books are sent to the Creative Commons
+Corporation.  In other words, I do not earn any money from this
+project, I just earn the warm fuzzy feeling that the text is available
+for a wider audience and more people can learn why the Creative
+Commons is needed.</p>
 
 <p>Today, just for fun, I had a look at the sales number over at
 Lulu.com, which take care of payment, printing and shipping.  Much to