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--- a/blog/data/2013-11-02-debian-init-d-script.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2013-11-02-debian-init-d-script.txt
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 Title: Debian init.d boot script example for rsyslog
-Tags: english, debian
+Tags: english, debian, bootsystem
 Date: 2013-11-02 22:40
 
 <p>If one of the points of switching to a new init system in Debian is
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ DAEMON=/usr/sbin/rsyslogd
 </pre></p>
 
 <p>Pretty minimalistic to me... For the record, the original sysv-rc
-script was 126 lines, and the above is just 15 lines, most of the meta
+script was 137 lines, and the above is just 15 lines, most of it meta
 info/comments.</p>
 
 <p>How to do this, you ask?  Well, one create a new script
@@ -184,10 +184,12 @@ esac
 </pre></p>
 
 <p>It is based on /etc/init.d/skeleton, and could be improved quite a
-lot.  I did not try hard to optimize it nor make it more robust.</p>
+lot.  I did not really polish the approach, so it might not always
+work out of the box, but you get the idea.  I did not try very hard to
+optimize it nor make it more robust either.</p>
 
 <p>A better argument for switching init system in Debian than reducing
 the size of init scripts (which is a good thing to do anyway), is to
 get boot system that is able to handle the kernel events sensibly and
-robustly, and do not depend the boot to run sequentially.  The boot
-and the kernel have not behaved sequentially in year.</p>
+robustly, and do not depend on the boot to run sequentially.  The boot
+and the kernel have not behaved sequentially in years.</p>