From 0024ddc49bf2daf1d9cd500019f3a7194bcbbba1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Petter Reinholdtsen <pere@hungry.com>
Date: Tue, 12 Jul 2005 11:20:30 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Fix typos and add a point about configuration file formats.

---
 .../enterprise-software.html                   | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/mypapers/enterprise-software/enterprise-software.html b/mypapers/enterprise-software/enterprise-software.html
index f36d70cbd0..ba92fb204a 100644
--- a/mypapers/enterprise-software/enterprise-software.html
+++ b/mypapers/enterprise-software/enterprise-software.html
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ long time ago, and the program is still used in production. -->
 full, one do not want to kick out 30000 users to take down the
 database and resize the file system.</p>
 
-<h2>Disktrouble</h2>
+<h2>Disk trouble</h2>
 
 <p>RAID is only only useful until the last redundancy disk is lost.
 
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ painful and prone to errors.</p>
 
 <p>Trying to get some network server to work when it require to use
 some given port range, which is already taken by some other service
-and blocked in the router -- or try to get the coorporate network
+and blocked in the router -- or try to get the corporate network
 gatekeeper to open up the firewall</p>
 
 <h2>Version trouble</h2>
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ PHP usable with all of these?
 
 <h2>Usability trouble</h2>
 
-<p>When starting a program from the meny, where does it go if nothing
+<p>When starting a program from the menu, where does it go if nothing
 appear on the screen?
 
 <p>Do users always read their ~/.xsession-error file?
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ appear on the screen?
   the operations needing root access. (build / configuration as well)
 
 <li>make sure the software can be installed anywhere (location
-  independent), avoid hardcoding paths into the binaries.
+  independent), avoid hard coding paths into the binaries.
 
 <li>make the source available to make it possible to fix problems on
   site, and to use it on different platforms (os/hw) in the future
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ appear on the screen?
   extra library in place
 
 <li>use well known libraries instead of making your own implementation.
-  reduses the security risk.
+  reduces the security risk.
 
 <li>make sure libraries, and programming languages are backwards
   compatible.
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ appear on the screen?
 <li>reuse configuration when possible.  ktouch have its own x layout setting.
   better to fetch the current one from X like xkeycaps.
 
-<li>providing hooks to the local admins
+<li>providing hooks to the local administrators
 
 <li>reduce flexibility.  trying to support people over the phone when
   the gui is different for every person is a pain.
@@ -199,7 +199,9 @@ appear on the screen?
 
       <li>local configuration should be kept during upgrades</li>
 
-      <li>easiest to do if the local configration is separate from the
+      <li>do not change configuration file format</li>
+
+      <li>easiest to do if the local configuration is separate from the
         package default
 
       <li>several actors what to have a say in the service
@@ -218,8 +220,6 @@ appear on the screen?
 
     </ul>
 
-
-
     <h2>Thank you very much</h2>
 
     <h3>Questions?</h3>
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