From: Petter Reinholdtsen <pere@hungry.com>
Date: Thu, 4 Feb 2016 15:59:10 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: Improve text.
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Improve text.
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diff --git a/blog/data/2016-02-04-appstream-firmware.txt b/blog/data/2016-02-04-appstream-firmware.txt
index 93c3daf9d6..03bafd7c5a 100644
--- a/blog/data/2016-02-04-appstream-firmware.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2016-02-04-appstream-firmware.txt
@@ -2,11 +2,12 @@ Title: Using appstream in Debian to locate packages with firmware and mime type
 Tags: english, debian
 Date: 2016-02-04 16:40
 
-<p>The <a href="https://wiki.debian.org/DEP-11">appstream system</a> is
-taking shape in Debian, and one feature set that is very convenient is
-its ability to tell you want package to install to get a given
-firmware file.  This can be done using apt-file too, but that is for
-someone else to blog about. :)</p>
+<p>The <a href="https://wiki.debian.org/DEP-11">appstream system</a>
+is taking shape in Debian, and one provided feature is a very
+convenient way to tell you which package to install to make a given
+firmware file available when the kernel is looking for it.  This can
+be done using apt-file too, but that is for someone else to blog
+about. :)</p>
 
 <p>Here is a small recipe to find the package with a given firmware
 file, in this example I am looking for ctfw-3.2.3.0.bin, randomly