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                 <pubDate>Fri, 2 Mar 2018 13:10:00 +0100</pubDate>
-		<description>&lt;p&gt;Today I was pleasantly surprised to discover by operating system of
-choice, Debian, was used in the info screens on the subway.  While
-passing Nydalen subway station in Oslo, Norway, I discovered the info
-screen booting with some text scrolling.  I was not quick enough with
-my camera to be able to record a video of the scrolling boot screen,
-but I did get a photo from when the boot got stuck with a corrupt file
-system:
+		<description>&lt;p&gt;Today I was pleasantly surprised to discover my operating system of
+choice, Debian, was used in the info screens on the subway stations.
+While passing Nydalen subway station in Oslo, Norway, I discovered the
+info screen booting with some text scrolling.  I was not quick enough
+with my camera to be able to record a video of the scrolling boot
+screen, but I did get a photo from when the boot got stuck with a
+corrupt file system:
 
 &lt;p align=&quot;center&quot;&gt;&lt;a href=&quot;http://people.skolelinux.org/pere/blog/images/2018-03-02-ruter-debian-lenny.jpeg&quot;&gt;&lt;img align=&quot;center&quot; width=&quot;40%&quot; src=&quot;http://people.skolelinux.org/pere/blog/images/2018-03-02-ruter-debian-lenny.jpeg&quot; alt=&quot;[photo of subway info screen]&quot;&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
 
-&lt;p&gt;While I am happy to see Debian used more places, the details of the
-content on the screen worries me.
+&lt;p&gt;While I am happy to see Debian used more places, some details of the
+content on the screen worries me.&lt;/p&gt;
 
-The image show the version booting is &#39;Debian GNU/Linux lenny/sid&#39;,
+&lt;p&gt;The image show the version booting is &#39;Debian GNU/Linux lenny/sid&#39;,
 indicating that this is based on code taken from Debian Unstable/Sid
-between Debian Etch (version 4) was released 2007-04-08 and after
+after Debian Etch (version 4) was released 2007-04-08 and before
 Debian Lenny (version 5) was released 2009-02-14.  Since Lenny Debian
 has released version 6 (Squeeze) 2011-02-06, 7 (Wheezy) 2013-05-04, 8
 (Jessie) 2015-04-25 and 9 (Stretch) 2017-06-15, according to