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       <div class="title"><a href="http://people.skolelinux.org/pere/blog/Debian_used_in_the_subway_info_screens_in_Oslo__Norway.html">Debian used in the subway info screens in Oslo, Norway</a></div>
       <div class="date"> 2nd March 2018</div>
-      <div class="body"><p>Today I was pleasantly surprised to discover by operating system of
-choice, Debian, was used in the info screens on the subway.  While
-passing Nydalen subway station in Oslo, Norway, I discovered the info
-screen booting with some text scrolling.  I was not quick enough with
-my camera to be able to record a video of the scrolling boot screen,
-but I did get a photo from when the boot got stuck with a corrupt file
-system:
+      <div class="body"><p>Today I was pleasantly surprised to discover my operating system of
+choice, Debian, was used in the info screens on the subway stations.
+While passing Nydalen subway station in Oslo, Norway, I discovered the
+info screen booting with some text scrolling.  I was not quick enough
+with my camera to be able to record a video of the scrolling boot
+screen, but I did get a photo from when the boot got stuck with a
+corrupt file system:
 
 <p align="center"><a href="http://people.skolelinux.org/pere/blog/images/2018-03-02-ruter-debian-lenny.jpeg"><img align="center" width="40%" src="http://people.skolelinux.org/pere/blog/images/2018-03-02-ruter-debian-lenny.jpeg" alt="[photo of subway info screen]"></a></p>
 
-<p>While I am happy to see Debian used more places, the details of the
-content on the screen worries me.
+<p>While I am happy to see Debian used more places, some details of the
+content on the screen worries me.</p>
 
-The image show the version booting is 'Debian GNU/Linux lenny/sid',
+<p>The image show the version booting is 'Debian GNU/Linux lenny/sid',
 indicating that this is based on code taken from Debian Unstable/Sid
-between Debian Etch (version 4) was released 2007-04-08 and after
+after Debian Etch (version 4) was released 2007-04-08 and before
 Debian Lenny (version 5) was released 2009-02-14.  Since Lenny Debian
 has released version 6 (Squeeze) 2011-02-06, 7 (Wheezy) 2013-05-04, 8
 (Jessie) 2015-04-25 and 9 (Stretch) 2017-06-15, according to