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diff --git a/blog/data/2013-09-10-freedombox.txt b/blog/data/2013-09-10-freedombox.txt
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--- a/blog/data/2013-09-10-freedombox.txt
+++ b/blog/data/2013-09-10-freedombox.txt
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ up in their home and get access to secure and private services and
 communication.  The initial deployment platform have been the
 <a href="http://www.globalscaletechnologies.com/t-dreamplugdetails.aspx">Dreamplug</a>,
 which is a piece of hardware I do not own.  So to be able to test what
-the current Freedombox setup, I had to come up with a way to install
-it on some hardware I do got access to.  I have rewritten the
+the current Freedombox setup look like, I had to come up with a way to install
+it on some hardware I do have access to.  I have rewritten the
 <a href="https://github.com/NickDaly/freedom-maker">freedom-maker</a>
 image build framework to use .deb packages instead of only copying
 setup into the boot images, and thanks to this rewrite I am able to
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ users.  I've not been able to do anything else with it so far, but
 know there are several branches spread around github and other places
 with lots of half baked features.</p>
 
-<p>Anyway, if you want to have a look at the current stat, the
+<p>Anyway, if you want to have a look at the current state, the
 following recipes should work to give you a test machine to poke
 at.</p>
 
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ short "<tt>apt-get source -b freedombox-privoxy</tt>" away. :)</p>
 off the DHCP server by running "<tt>update-rc.d isc-dhcp-server
 disable</tt>" as root.</p>
 
-<p>Please let me know if this work for you, or if you have any
+<p>Please let me know if this works for you, or if you have any
 problems.  We gather on the IRC channel
 <a href="irc://irc.debian.org:6667/%23freedombox">#freedombox</a> on
 irc.debian.org and the